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thedonjames
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Wild and Wet

I was at a friends wedding unloading my things into my room ,Getting ready for our overnight rafting trip . I hear " Hey !, I hear you can make scream ?! As many as I can I reply .
I look up and its Tena , a bridesmaid in the wedding , a Barbie woman with large breasts , skinny waist and a perfect ass . She was incredible , dark hair and eyes , just beautiful . we chatted a bit and went our separate ways for now .

Next morning I go out to the river launch area and there stands Tena , tight white t shirt and very short red shorts . I said " I guess you're going to get wet , with a smile . She replies ,I sure hope so !

As we are going down the river , I do my best to keep her white t shirt nice and wet, hard nipples all day . We stop to set up our campsite and then go for a hike , Tena and I separate from the group and Tena says to me " I never met anyone could keep my panties wet all day , lets see if you can all night .

We started kissing and I unleashed her large breasts as I put my hand down her shorts and slide my finger into her tight little pussy , As she moans a little she tells me slow down , its my turn . She pushes me to the ground and rips off my shorts and start sucking my cock like there is no tomorrow . I didn't last long , as I was to cum she pulled off my dick and I came all over her large tits , as I lay there she rubs my cum into her tights and licks off the excess , by then, I am hard again I roll her over and mount her from the back , as I am pounding her tight pussy , I can see her tits just swaying away . The next morning we wake up and .....


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Great start but more detail would help.

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Need to slow down and add more details please, great story though

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Can't have too many details when I am at work writing , thanks for the constructive criticism , try my second edition

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Nice start for a story but too short. Missing words is distracting. Just because you are writing at work doesnt mean you have to submit right away. Save it and finsh later. Proofread, proofread then proofread.

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